Monday, 28 September 2015

Blog improvements


I have recieved a number of comments from DB on a variety of posts signifying changes and improvements I could make to enable my blog to become better. 

These include:


  • Make sure text is NORMAL size and black, not grey. Solid analysis of shot1, but add some semiotic terms. 2+3 you've given the wrong shot type - ask me to go through this with you on Shot types - Les Miserables
  • Quite good but I think you could add to and improve on this - and you certainly should add some imagery/links to this on Analysis of This is England figures
  • Good. Now highlight terminology. Watch out for presentation issues like blank lines at the end of a post on This is England frame analysis
  • Post title? Don't quote my words back at me unless you're clearly setting them out as a quote and providing the source. We discussed this in a lesson and I've added a post with much more you can put in your own words.

I then made the following changes according to the criticism I received from DB:

  • On the Shot types - Les Miserables post I have now changed the tables of the shots so they are correct and I have also expanded in each case and gone more in depth.
  • On the Analysis of This is England figures post I have now gone more in depth on the the analysis of figures and I have now added some images to enable the post to be more aesthetically pleasing.
  • On the This is England frame analysis post I have now changed all semiotic key terms we have learned so far to pink so that they stand out whilst reading. I have also eliminated all the white space at the bottom allowing the post to look more professional. 
  • On the Charles Gant's rule post I have now added extra content which is in my words avoiding the idea of plagiarism. I have also quoted the post I received the initial information from.


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